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©2005-2010 ~daporta
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Ok. I fix this scene whit a new tree, new side walk and little details.

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:icontrekker:
Very nice, I like the various textures in here, the grass, the tile roofing, the rock wall. I do spot a window on the left side that is not in line with the others, and I don't know if it's just the way you did them or not, but the leaves on the two big trees don't look like pixel art. Other than those things though, you did a great job. :)

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:ninjaeat:
Click it....Click it good.
:iconcelinh0:
me gustan las texturas!
trekker, i dont think it doesnt look like pixelart... it think it does, and it mustve taken queite a while to do the leaves!
daporta, my advices would be:
- fix the left central window, the distance between the 3 isnt the same, so it looks different...
- add some lightning/shadowing to the stone wall, using darker tones for the left sides of it
- inner lines should be bright, itd give the drawing a much cleaner look also!
and to finish my comments, the last one :blushes: :use more natural colors for the glass in the windows... maybe a more grayish tone of blue... looks more natural

i like that procjet, and it could look even better!!

perdoname por pendejarte tanto con correcciones :P
:icondaporta:
Thanks for your comments. Respect the leaves of the trees I made it one by one, it took me a lot of time, but I feel satisfied with the results. And finally you are Wright about the window at the left, I will fix soon.
:icondaporta:
Muchas gracias por tus comentarios
Tus consejos son muy buenos y te lo agradezco ya que esta es la manera de aprender y hacer mejor las cosas. Pronto editaré esta escena. :)
:iconzi-:
nice work :)

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:) I wish you success :)
:iconselfrighteoussuicide:
This is truly spectacular. I would not have the patience for such a piece :)

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:icondaporta:
thank for comments in qta. froilan ;)
:icontoji89:
The detail's amazing!

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:iconkenshi-kei:
THE ROOM, the EVERYTHING!

great work again! *adds to favs

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